The modern world can be characterized by brand new events and happenings with either good or bad affect that may occur anytime and at any place. Keeping tracks of all these daily happenings is not an easy task. And, one can even lead a very smooth life without keeping up with the recent occurrences in the world. But, it is quite risky to ignore these current facts because we may face certain consequences for not following them. I, definitely agree that it is important to know about the events happening around the world, even if it may not affect our daily life, and the reasons of this belief is put light on the following passages.
At the outset, I would like state that being up-to-date and keeping track of all the recent happenings in the world allows us to be confident. When we remain updated about something, out confidence level is boosted and this helps us to live a smart life. For instance, a person working in a particular company is definitely required to keep track of all information regarding the rise and fall in economies of different countries of the world. So, if an employee remains updated about all these information, then, he/she can feel the surge of confidence while taking part in a meeting or business conference.
It is necessary to remain aware of the current situation of the world because it may save someone's life. Nowadays, air or water borne diseases spread rapidly among the countries and news related to them are spread at a very fast pace through media. Although we may not get infected by these diseases, it is advantageous to get a pre-knowledge about them so that we can remain cautious.
When we keep tracks of events and happenings around the world, we prevent ourselves from getting embarrassed at social events or in our workplace. I would like to cite my own real-life example in this context. Recently, in the 2018 Asian Games, one of the athletes from India won a gold medal and one silver in relay race and 400m race respectively. Soon, this news became viral in our state as she was from our place, i.e., Assam. But, I was totally unaware about that victory because I was busy preparing for the TOEFL test. The people from every nook and corner of our state was excited about her and talked about her with enthusiasm. Then, in a family event held at my brother's place, I met some our relatives and talked to them. Soon, they started talking about the athlete and I stood there like a statue because I was unaware of that news. I was so embarrassed with myself that after standing with them for some time, I slipped away from their side and quickly surfed the internet to know about the news. This was really a very good lesson I have learnt about being updated.
Moreover, we can have an upper hand at the competitive exams if we are up-to-date about all the recent events and happenings around the world. In most of the competitive exams, one part of it is focused on the knowledge about current affairs. Thus, having an updated knowledge about these happenings will make it easy for us to crack those exams.
It is seen that keeping tracks of recent events and happenings around the world will help us in many ways even if not knowing them may not have any adverse affect on our day-to-day life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... and happenings with either good or bad affect that may occur anytime and at any place. Kee...
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Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...f an employee remains updated about all these information, then, he/she can feel the surge of con...
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Line 11, column 157, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...t knowing them may not have any adverse affect on our day-to-day life.
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Line 11, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... adverse affect on our day-to-day life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, really, regarding, so, then, thus, while, as to, for instance, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 94.0 52.1666666667 180% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2689.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 581.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62822719449 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90957651803 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46355105692 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466437177281 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 853.2 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5058969722 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.423076923 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3461538462 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237641846779 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704837402813 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758392195358 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140660007 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900986505147 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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