In modern era, the fast-pace development today is bringing comforts and luxurious life, but it also make the more complex human life. It should require the organization skill in the each and every field. In school to the jobs people are need the make plan for easier work. I strongly concur the author statement that in the modern life of the younger requires the skill to make plan and organize because of save time and money of the organization, easily reach to goal and get the uniform work at the time.
To begin with, proper plan is help to get the success in the life. When a person make plan, he think the variety of approches and huge ways before organize the schedules. This plan help to follow the schedule at the time to time and reach to the goal. For example, in my last year of the college, I have to much concern about the study because of final year was important for my whole result. The huge subject, seminar and training i was very depress but my friend suggest me that i make the schedule which help to follow easily and study done by time to time, Finally i was make the schedule and follow the plans to reach the my goal.
Furthermore, the plan facitate to receive the uniform work and it is help to divide the certain amount of the work in specific day and person. This plan is save time and money of the people. For instance, the owner of the manufacturing tablet, He first make organize the whole structure of the machine and worker, then, he make list for amount of equipment per worker so easily divide the work and get the long term uniform productivity. If he not make plan then not get the desirable work. Consequently, company get the loss and also waste time for find the new ways for profits.
In conclusion, contemplating aforementioned reasons, as soon realizes that young people must have the abilities to plan and organize because of it is not help in the school and college but also it is require in job and company to get the better result. I certainly agree that in modern life is very complex, it is require for younger to have skill to plan and organize to get the desirable work and reach to success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...omforts and luxurious life, but it also make the more complex human life. It should ...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...n the life. When a person make plan, he think the variety of approches and huge ways ...
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... in my last year of the college, I have to much concern about the study because of...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... The huge subject, seminar and training i was very depress but my friend suggest ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y depress but my friend suggest me that i make the schedule which help to follow ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...and study done by time to time, Finally i was make the schedule and follow the pl...
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Line 4, column 623, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
... schedule and follow the plans to reach the my goal. Furthermore, the plan facitate t...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...ure of the machine and worker, then, he make list for amount of equipment per worker...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...get the long term uniform productivity. If he not make plan then not get the desir...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...ng term uniform productivity. If he not make plan then not get the desirable work. C...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'helped'.
Suggestion: helped
... plan and organize because of it is not help in the school and college but also it i...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...n the school and college but also it is require in job and company to get the better re...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...t in modern life is very complex, it is require for younger to have skill to plan and o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45939086294 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38267022922 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42385786802 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6992143873 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.8125 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215427413547 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813998270249 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575561487221 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153312141629 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669509650431 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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