Most people prefer to make new friends, in order to find happiness and new experiences in a social environment. This depends on everyone. However, in my opinion, I disagree with this decision, because I prefer to maintain my old friends even though when they are part of a very small group, for the next reasons.
Firstly, I think that making many new friends as a needing, sometimes could bring us such advantages as disadvantages, those people do not know you very well, they do not care what your interests are or even your familiar situation, whatever. For example, imagine you are going to the college and you are a freshman; you do not know anyone on campus, for any reason, you need to share your time with others. Therefore, you can have a meeting with other students, introducing yourself, talking with them what you like, etc. However, you cannot say those people will be confident with you because it is too soon to trust in them. Even though it is very important to wait a little more time, until you could identify each person, and therefore, determinate who of them will be your real friend.
Secondly, maintaining your friendship with a small group for a long time could be better, because you can spend your time with them, share your opinions, what things you like, as a result of this, you are maybe creating a solid relationship with those who really care for you. Another example, imagine you have a familiar trouble and you have to share your situation with someone, consequently, there is no better way to have an old friend who really cares for you and therefore, talk about your experience with him or her.
Additionally, most people, not in my case, have the ability to make new friends, and they can be part of a solid friendship. However, according to the behavior of each person, and how this measures its plans with those friends, it could be produced a real happiness, a strong social environment and this is very valuable.
Finally, I can mention that I am a person very shy, what I mean is that I am not very sociable. In addition, I consider that maintaining my very small group of friends for a long time, could bring happiness to me. Moreover, this theory could have many variations, and this opinion depends on everyone, in order to understand what other people need in order to be happy. Think about it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, i mean, i think, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6884057971 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57928152367 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461352657005 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4026089272 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.3125 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4375 5.45110844103 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288787924766 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998275253122 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660609576667 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161154651214 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544145702263 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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