Friendship is one of great kinds of relationships. It is the truly meaning of honest, loyalty, confidence and love. I think that every person is in the needing of this relationship and i see that lonely person is looks like a body without soul. you can divide the types of friends to many kinds, as you know there are classmate friends, childhood friends, roommate friends and friends of your sporting team and every stage and almost every day you are exposure to have a new relationships. That's kinds of variety of friends are really exciting and interested however, i see that the real meaning of happiness doesn't occur until you have a very close friend.
In my view, a close friend is like my second family. Really it is very rare to find one that you easily get in touch with and feeling a comfortable and peace effect toward him, the one that has a shoulder to cry on when you are in trouble, the one that always be with you through thick and thin; so if you find one you will be a lucky person.
For example, at my first class on secondary school. I participated a seat with smart like girl. I felt that I would be awkward if I strike up a conversation with her but, I surprised when she began to introduce her self, she began with : hello, my name is Malika, would you mind to speak little with you?!! I felt very pleasant and we began to be a close friends and we had a lot in common. she was the best close friend for me and the only one that is near and dear for me. For sure we had ups and downs in our relations, however we still friends till now, it is being almost 15 year and Malika is still my best friend and my second sister and I named my daughter Malika also!!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...in the needing of this relationship and i see that lonely person is looks like a ...
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Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...rson is looks like a body without soul. you can divide the types of friends to many...
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Line 1, column 476, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'relationship'?
Suggestion: relationship
...very day you are exposure to have a new relationships. Thats kinds of variety of friends are ...
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Line 1, column 491, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...e exposure to have a new relationships. Thats kinds of variety of friends are really ...
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Line 1, column 569, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...really exciting and interested however, i see that the real meaning of happiness ...
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Line 1, column 610, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... see that the real meaning of happiness doesnt occur until you have a very close frien...
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Line 6, column 275, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind speaking'.
Suggestion: mind speaking
...h : hello, my name is Malika, would you mind to speak little with you?!! I felt very pleasant...
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Line 6, column 308, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ld you mind to speak little with you?!! I felt very pleasant and we began to be a...
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Line 6, column 392, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ose friends and we had a lot in common. she was the best close friend for me and th...
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Line 6, column 541, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'friend'
Suggestion: friend
...owns in our relations, however we still friends till now, it is being almost 15 year an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, really, second, so, still, for example, i think, you know, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25155279503 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35141713719 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515527950311 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.9883505249 48.9658058833 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161191039157 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554761506956 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369006296121 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109068702453 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00512413191604 0.0645574589148 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.67 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 86.8835125448 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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