People always be happy when they are with their that includes old friends and new. This happiness can be maintain only balancing the time how spending with them. Here, spending time not literally how much minutes and hours we are spending with them, it is all about quality of time we spend. I like to say that spend more with old friends very important as per knowledge.
First of all, old friends are always understand our position and thought and we need not explain to them why I came to party because they everything about us no matter where your in this world. Such kinds of friends, are valuable and preciouses in our life, we should not miss them at any cost. Even, they are god's gift. So, in order maintain the proximity one must spend more with their old friends, that gives whole happiness and joy to our life, not only who have friendship with him but also for his entire family.
Secondly, it is hard to make new friendship with given time limit, to come to the right conclusion, one should do analysis, research, evaluate the new friends character. And, who knows whether person act as if good person or really good? it is all kind of risky job. It may be end up with complicated situation where you cannot escape from it. As elder says that "what ever there in your hand is better than new one". Those who don't want in trouble it is better maintain the existing friendship rather than looking for new friendship, especially orthodox families.
Thirdly, you may feel some excitement when you make new friendship, that is true, but what about the carrier? For example, a friend of mine who is very clever and smart guy and he made friendship with new who is drug dealer but he hided the fact. One day, police came to their apartment when they all together in the party, police found out there was illegal available in his store room and then, they took everyone to police station. Because of that he could write the next day university exam which was horrible event happend to him even though his moral is good.
To conclude that to be most happiest better to spend more with old friends and don;t look for new unknown friendship that kills you with lots of pain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
.... Here, spending time not literally how much minutes and hours we are spending with ...
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Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
... First of all, old friends are always understand our position and thought and we need no...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'friends'' or 'friend's'?
Suggestion: friends'; friend's
...do analysis, research, evaluate the new friends character. And, who knows whether perso...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...n act as if good person or really good? it is all kind of risky job. It may be end...
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Line 7, column 439, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...is better than new one'. Those who dont want in trouble it is better maintain t...
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Line 10, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...but what about the carrier? For example, a friend of mine who is very clever and ...
^^
Line 13, column 24, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'happiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: happiest
...al is good. To conclude that to be most happiest better to spend more with old friends a...
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Line 13, column 24, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the happiest'.
Suggestion: most the happiest
...al is good. To conclude that to be most happiest better to spend more with old friends a...
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Line 13, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dship that kills you with lots of pain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for example, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60152284264 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25294519807 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560913705584 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5292762291 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4210526316 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7368421053 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264473736722 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838787746087 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711190984017 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160026644049 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487426693156 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.