Nowadays, in 2018, with advancement of technology and get progress of community, in development countries, the transportation get improvement. So the government should spend money to update the internet stuffs. In my opinion, all the countries in the world must have free public internet.
First, in these days, most of the people, have own smarts phone. So they used to it, and if they forgot to bring it, they would feel bad. I’ve never seen who can live one day without a cellphone. I’m surely, we became addicted to the internet. Also we already use internet in cars too. For example, Toyota is jumping into the latest development in automotive technology by providing a Wi-Fi hotspot in their vehicles, starting with several popular models in 2018. The existing Intune infotainment system has provided Toyota owners with a lot of valuable information over the year, like as TOYOTA CH-R. This partnership with one of the top names in wireless technology allows owners to have nearly uninterrupted access to a high-speed 4G LTE signal that is also very secure. Toyota Wi-Fi Connect is available for all Toyota vehicles featuring certain versions of the infotainment system.
Second, with advent of science, vehicles have changed a lot from the past until now, from cars that are taxis or underground and air subways, as well as personal helicopters and relief helicopters, all of them have been changed in these several years, and still have to progress. For example, in the past of Japan, the first railway line in Japan commenced operations in 1872, Today, if you attached all of the train tracks in Japan together they would take you two-thirds of the way around the world or approximately 27 thousand kilometers.
In conclusion, the advancement of science and technology, all the things get improvements. And it’s not possible that one thing will progress, and the other is not. All the governments make every effort to make their people happy. I hope that the examples given above have sufficiently expressed my opinion.
- TPO-17 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-08 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO-08 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ly, we became addicted to the internet. Also we already use internet in cars too. Fo...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n versions of the infotainment system. Second, with advent of science, vehicles...
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Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...rations in 1872, Today, if you attached all of the train tracks in Japan together they wou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, still, third, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11607142857 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83007860028 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8062098835 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123437742878 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040196761402 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619500951161 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848106830487 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811808328909 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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