No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that since the dawn of humanity, human lives have undergone dramatic changes. When it comes to this point, a lot of people are on the conviction that life is easier nowadays than when our ancestors lived; while others stand on the opposite side of the continuum, and believe that with the advent of technology human beings have encountered severe problems. I agree with the first idea, and in the ensuing paragraph, I will delve into the paramount reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
First, with the arrival of technology, transportation made a plethora of task more convenient. Travelling in the past was done by walking or riding animals, and need arduous efforts and a lot of time. Still, the invention of vehicles, among which are airplanes, cars, and trains, made travelling to the most remote areas of the word reachable. Moreover, fast transporting brings about access to an abundance of imported products such as fruit, meat, etc. For example, my grandfather once told me that they travelled by horses and the shortest trip took long about two weeks. A funny story he told me was about the time that the banana first arrived in his city by new cars and trunks. Because the banana was not domestic, they did not know what it is, and how they should eat it.
Another noteworthy reason for supporting my idea is that modern communication methods provide people with the easiest and fastest way of becoming aware of others throughout the world. It goes without saying that the internet, mobiles, and other means of communication are more comfortable than old-fashioned methods like letters. To put it into a more vivid picture, when my uncle was soldier, and he was defending our barriers in a war, his family was always worried and stressful about his situations because there was no mean of communication except for letters.
On the other hands, my brother is studying engineering abroad, and every day we make a video call and talk to each other. It can be concluded that the more communication ways thrive, the more lives become more comfortable.
To wrap it up, according to the mentioned reasons, I think that now it is clear why life is more comfort nowadays rather than the past. It was just the story in a nutshell; and there are more reasons, such as better sanitation, mechanization of tasks, to name but a few, that should be considered.
- TPO 33 Integrate writing : Carved stone balls are a curious type of artifact found at a number of locations in Scotland. They date from the late Neolithic period, around 4,000 years ago. They are round in shape; they were carved from several types of ston 83
- TPO 28 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 90
- TPO 30Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. Use specific reasons and examples to 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should recieve equal financial support. 78
- Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, still, while, except for, for example, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81927710843 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70966400048 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580722891566 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8489657341 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.647058824 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4117647059 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185384327748 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529948940124 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473594918714 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978353776515 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308130266119 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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