Life style is undoubtedly is a crucial thing in human life. A controversial argument that is often raised regarding this topic is whether to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another. If I were obliged to take sides, I would think that move from one place to another is better for several reasons, on a few of which I will elaborate subsequently.
To begin with, I believe that there are lots of opportunities around the world for each individual. Anyone who has some skills in something can look for its chances around the world express his or her passion. I believe my opinion is partially influenced by my personal experience. I have been teaching programming for 2 years back in college, back then there were few programming teachers in other cities that capital of my country, so I decided to go to other cities and teach programming to students there. I earned good money and students learned a lot from me. As a result, moving to another city has its own profits.
Secondly, There are various cultures in different cities around the globe. When you move to another city, you have the chance to get familiar with their culture, experience new food, new people, finding new friends. Once you find suitable culture for yourself you stay there for longer time and as soon as it gets boring again, you go to your next destination. for instance, I knew a friend who travel around the world, stays on each city about 4 to 6 month and then travel to somewhere else. By now, he learned 6 different languages and experienced so many cool stuffs.
Finally, I believe life is short and people should go and experience different lifestyles before its too late. For example my grandpa was borned in Tehran, Iran and moved to Rasht in his 20's, experienced lots of things there, got skills and degree and immigrate to Germany in 26. Meet my grandma there and moved to the USA in 32. You see, he was so happy and even find his true love in another city beside where he was born.
I resist the temptation to explain more, hoping there is enough information already. To sum it up, as the reasons suggest, moving from one place to another is better. Because not only you get more opportunities for your life, but you get familiar with several cultures and you'll live a happier life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58554216867 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52067773203 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549397590361 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3077658994 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.619047619 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7619047619 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278346438443 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787316703038 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959759953392 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173520073384 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117918168648 0.0645574589148 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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