TPO 66: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People who develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only.
Nowadays, the crucial importance of learning professions is explicit to everyone. Now, it is a big deal to decide if we should look for catching several skills or, we ought to set our minds just on a specific job to succeed. I am of the conviction that it is much better to consider only one major and try to develop it. I feel this way due to a couple of reasons that I will explore in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, focusing on one skill can help a person to become professional in that subject since s\he can put all his or her efforts and attention on it, and besides spend more time developing it. I should admit that my opinion is influenced by my personal experience. My sister chooses her major when she was a teen and she kept studying and researching on it during her years of study in university, hence, now she is an elite person in her major that sees a good deal of opportunity in front of her to choose the place that she wants to work because every company is looking for a skilled person. So, I think working to improve one skill helped her to become a top person in her field of study.
Moreover, stay determined on one main skill can prevent confusion. Because there is no need to look around and get lost in different subjects and shuffle between them. For instance, in my first two years of study, I tried to learn a variety of programming skills. Then it caused loads of tensions for me because I was so confused that what I am going to do? Which one I like most or in what field I should work, or even which one is more beneficial for me, and all these thoughts were bothering me until my advisor in university suggest me that I had better choose one of them and continue my efforts in that field. So I decided for the rest of my study, I should only focus on one programming language.
To sum up, in my opinion, staying focused and devote all your time and energy just to one particular skill is more efficient and makes people more successful. It is because it supports the process of becoming professional and skillful and prevents confusion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, if, look, moreover, so, then, for instance, i feel, i think, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38402061856 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54274097615 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5508724178 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.3125 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173420186722 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590799243443 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506961086074 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116332251645 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453867809848 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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