Few subjects are as controversy as the necessity of telling truth in human relationship. Some people who advocate telling lie have argued that not always being trusty is admirable, while untruth in some occasions allows people to have a better communication. This view, at first glance seems absurd. However, in my perspective, twisting some parts of real is not regarded as immoral facts.
The first justification for telling lie is that a lie is not always a sin. Instead, it is beneficial for both side of parities in friendship relation. There are some occasions in everyone's life that conceal...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...re of social relationship. For example, an hoest or trusthworthy man is more likel...
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Line 9, column 254, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'values'?
Suggestion: values
...ation. However, trusty isnever loose it value as its essential consideration of socia...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ial consideration of social gathering.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'conversely', 'first', 'frankly', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2343387471 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.167053364269 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0904872389791 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0788863109049 0.046263068375 171% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0348027842227 0.0685040099705 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.143851508121 0.118717715034 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0672853828306 0.0351676179071 191% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.79910406442 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0185614849188 0.0309702414327 60% => OK
Particles: 0.00232018561485 0.00188951952338 123% => OK
Determiners: 0.0858468677494 0.0887237588012 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0046403712297 0.0209618222197 22% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00696055684455 0.0139019557991 50% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2380.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 390.0 408.028673835 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.10256410256 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.374358974359 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.287179487179 0.251872472559 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197435897436 0.174417080927 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138461538462 0.112833075102 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79910406442 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548717948718 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 62.2433944856 59.2087087015 105% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5714285714 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4305982464 48.84282405 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 120.699889404 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52380952381 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 47.2893772894 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.5867768595 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241408413015 0.300154397459 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0619947840932 0.103427244359 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0459199516367 0.0752933317313 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.464605292415 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.102335062998 0.151897553556 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862028957518 0.114077575197 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563684179223 0.0781384742642 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.293277835689 0.336927656856 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0721146205054 0.067059652881 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160382954596 0.210909579961 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408474559754 0.0618886996521 66% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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