Nowadays, cars are no longer some things that are used to showcase people's wealth, because it is rather common that each family possesses one or even more cars. However, this situation is likely to change soon. In Beijing, more and more people are starting taking buses or subways instead of cars to go to work. It is likely that in twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
With the development of buses and subways, wherever the destination is, it is more and more convenient to take the bus or subway there. In Beijing, dozens of subway lines, as well as hundreds of bus lines and stations can lead the passenger to anywhere in Beijing. On the contrary, thanks to the popularity of cars, people who drive cars would probably encounter a traffic jam and eventually take more time. Thus taking public transportation vehicles will become more common and eventually take the place of driving cars.
Beyond the convenience, it is also more economical to take buses or subways. A car typically costs several hundred thousand yuan, while taking a bus usually consumes one yuan. So if one takes a bus twice a day, the money to buy a car can afford him/her to take a bus for several thousand years, and that does not count the cost of repairing and fuels yet. Without a car, people could then use the saved money in many other places, such as the education of their children or buying a house. Considering the fact that many families could not both afford their children to receive a better education and buy a house, more and more people would probably discard the thought of owning a car.
From the perspective of governments, more regulations will be put forward to prevent the purchase of cars due to the concern about environmental health. Cars are notorious for its producing of carbon dioxide which directly causes the greenhouse effect. There are growing concerns about this issue across the world. More governments enact policies to reduce the effect, which usually consists of the restrictions of cars. For instance, Beijing only allows the cars with odd or even car plate number to be driven on some roads in some certain time. This is the trend, and people's desire to own a car will thus decrease over time.
Cars, certainly, have their own merits. People can feel the joy and freedom when driving a car. However, for the sake of convenience, saving money and governmental regulations, there will be fewer people who want to purchase cars, and thus resulting in fewer cars in use than today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2097.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76590909091 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48578499998 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5719458231 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3181818182 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271560871977 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918369556476 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161938856993 0.0737576698707 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18301435924 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119722501575 0.0645574589148 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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