A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture. Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? U

It is a undeniable fact that a research plays an important role in our life as it innovates new techniques to improve our standard of living. Some people think a business research center would be a good idea to develop while others disagree. Being a daughter of a farmer family, I would strongly recommend developing a research center for agriculture. I would like to discuss the following reasons for my choice.

The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that my country’s economy is highly depending on the agriculture; India is a leading country in the agriculture business. With the help o...

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