Watching television is bad for children. Do you agree or disagree?
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that children have always been looking for some exciting amusement or hobbies. Indeed, vast majorities of children opt for television dubbed by some magic or gimmick box because of too many cartoons and movies. Stemming from this fact a relevant question that is a moot point is whether children should watch TV or not. Due to the controversial nature of this question, there is not a general agreement on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that not only can TV destroy children's' behavior but also could have deleterious effects on their health. The following reasons will aptly substantiate my personal perspective.
To commence with, there is no doubt that myriads of people spend their precious time watching TV in their spare time but it might have deleterious effects on people's lives especially youth. Generally phrased, celebrities that play an important role in every given society present on the screen in an inappropriate way like smoking, which could provide fertile ground for children to mimic their behavior. For instance, many well-known individuals do not make a secret of alcohol, drugs, short relationship and so forth. These immoral manners by celebrities might make children think that imitate that behavior is acceptable. To elucidate more on this issue, watching television by the presence of celebrities not only will harm children's relation but also will cause antisocial problems, which can threat children lives.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that watching TV will cause irreversible mental and physical health problem for the children. To put it in another word, based on different studies conducted by researchers, crowds of children who spend most of their time watching TV are not healthy enough and suffer from physical problems and eyesight. Going into the depth, watching TV not only can aggravate children's health condition but also can impact their eyesight negatively.
However, in some case, TV will make children knowledgeable and provide an opportunity for them to enhance their information about various fields by watching documents, movies and so forth. Indeed, many children suffer from a paucity of knowledge but watching television will patronize them to compensate the lack of knowledge.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that television has played a key role in people's lives throughout history. In fact, due to the presence of celebrities on the screen watching TV will damage children relationship and make them mimic immoral behavior. In addition, watching television might put people's health into danger and run them into a huge problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an inappropriate way" with adverb for "inappropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ery given society present on the screen in an inappropriate way like smoking, which could provide ferti...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...p and make them mimic immoral behavior. In addition, watching television might put...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, for instance, in addition, in fact, no doubt, by and large, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2275.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30303030303 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80058265115 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0042241537 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.736842105 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5789473684 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246604475224 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835572317591 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450618449309 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155644376791 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157855618185 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.