Since the dawn of civilisation, Jobs played a vital role in each indiviual's life. To having good collegues is significant as much as our jobs. Some days we have much more time with friends than our families. There are lots of significant characteristic in a friend who work with him/her such as knowledge, being friendly and others. The lines will shed light on my viewpoint.
The first important reason is experience. When you work with a experienced coworker, you can take advantage of his experiences; therefore working with a coworker who have experience is to worker's advantage. It teaches you how to be success in a business and opens new horizons. Furthermore, he might inspire you and be your role model, if he has experience.
Secondly, in approaching this matter, apart from what mentioned above, there is another subtle point which deserves some words. Being friendly is another vital feature in a coworker. After a tough work day to drink a cofffee with your boss would be amazing. If you manager is friendly, you can enjoy in your business. Moreover, a good manager should listen worker's problem and understand with them, if he want to reach their goals in work life.
To wrap it up, taking all aforementioned into account, boss and manager have important effect in our life. Being friendly and having experience makes a manager better for workers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...eason is experience. When you work with a experienced coworker, you can take adva...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is another vital feature in a coworker. After a tough work day to drink a cofffee wit...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...problem and understand with them, if he want to reach their goals in work life. T...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 230.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96956521739 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79524643753 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617391304348 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1732145657 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4375 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.375 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25631272793 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733215406679 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670713828537 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144494925741 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696913759262 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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