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We should require young children aged from 5 to 10 to learn music and art in addition to math, science, history and language.
It is widely accepted that music and art are the most beautiful language in the world. From my perspective, art assists to shape a mild characteristic, contributes to the development of brain and enriches children's lives. As a result, children should be encouraged to learn music and art. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
First of all, according to the scientific research, evidence is accumulating that music and art play decisive part in determining a person's character. In New York, about 100 children at the age of 5 volunteered to enter this research. Firstly scientists p...
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