Since more and more people get to know the importance of how to become a good parent, the answer may vary because many of us are puzzled about it. As far as my concern, love, patience and friendly to their children contribute to the key to be a good parent. I am a father who was a kid of my parents, I will address my views as follows.
To begin with, love is the most important quality of being a good parent. All of the children need love. Although I was not the hero of this story, my mother and I put pity on my friend when we're in middle school. The feeling then came to my mind whenever recalled this memory. Once this friend of mine was very easygoing, we had lots of good time when we're playing together. One day I found something wrong on him so I asked why. Tears in his face, he said his parents were about to divorce and his grandma would adopt him. I felt so lost that I spent more time with him. But my effort didn't work. Later I invited him to have dinner at my home. During the supper time, he seemed to be still lost. I whispered to my mother with my friend's trouble. We all felt so sorry about his parents' divorce. From that time, I knew the importance of love from parents, it is irreplaceable.
In addition, patients from parents are also essential to their children. Once I was annoyed by my son. He always asked some wired questions. There were some of the questions I could google it as where did the moon come from, while there was also some question that may worry Einstein like why the elephant could not fly. Once I found I was funny, while after a time I felt so boring and lost my temper. After reading some books about raising children, I realized it is the nature of children of being curious. The thing about myself my childhood were full of questions, too. Maybe it is because of my bad memory, or the expense of being an adult which lose lots of nature of human being.
Finally, the friendliness is another necessary quality of being a good parent. Once my parents were so strict on me that I would not want to make any risk. Thus I lost some of the working opportunities. When I was young, I was forced to listen to them without any objection. I was a tough time for me. I felt I was living in a box nearly isolated to the world outside. I tried to talk with them but they were affected by Chinese Tradition so much that they didn't listen to any words of mine. Thus I believe being a good friend with the children is another significant quality.
In all, it is a good phenomenon that more people focusing on the way of being good parents, I believe the love, , and friendship with the children would be the essential qualities of being a good parent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...portant quality of being a good parent. All of the children need love. Although I was not ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...spent more time with him. But my effort didnt work. Later I invited him to have dinne...
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Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s are also essential to their children. Once I was annoyed by my son. He always aske...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... asked some wired questions. There were some of the questions I could google it as where di...
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Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cessary quality of being a good parent. Once my parents were so strict on me that I ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...that I would not want to make any risk. Thus I lost some of the working opportunitie...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... not want to make any risk. Thus I lost some of the working opportunities. When I was young...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...x nearly isolated to the world outside. I tried to talk with them but they were a...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... by Chinese Tradition so much that they didnt listen to any words of mine. Thus I bel...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...they didnt listen to any words of mine. Thus I believe being a good friend with the ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... being good parents, I believe the love, , and friendship with the children would ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, still, then, thus, while, as for, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 15.1003584229 245% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2187.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 513.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26315789474 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32987599558 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479532163743 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 689.4 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4310361619 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.3235294118 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0882352941 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73529411765 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.85842293907 389% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1253900767 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350718753954 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506021355778 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930736096164 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321286682666 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 11.7677419355 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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