When famous people such as actors, athletes and rock stars give their opinions, many people listen. Do you think we should pay attention to these opinions? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
This is a very debatable question. If we want to come up with some suitable answers to this question, we would need to look at the pros and the cons of this question, and then draw conclusions. Even then it would not be possible to directly answer. It would depend upon the kind of lifestyle we have, educational backgrounds, individual personalities and emotional concerns as well as the situation that we are in, and so forth.
In my opinion that famous people play a positive role in everyone's life and career is an undeniable fact.
Should people realize the significance of famous people in their life and studies, they will ponder over it much more scrupulously.
These days, famous people are experts or not has recently been the topic of debate among psychologist and people in our province.
I do believe that it is not the good thing that we listen to any famous people speech. There are a lot of different reasons for high value that support my point of view, and I would like to further illustrate a few of the most important ones in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, I want to mention one of the primary reasons that famous people are not experts. Not only do they not experts, but also some of them don't have high-level education about their activities. We have a lot of famous people in all around the world that they are not suitable skill about their activities. Most of them playing just for money or just for enjoying. Very few famous people have an educational experience.
The second reason why I advocate this point of view lies in the fact that these days most of the people speak about everything, such as politic, sports, and so forth, without any knowledge. Especially common people pay more attention to famous people. They think famous people know everything in the fact that they are famous.
Last but certainly not least, thinking about this question more meticulously, I would like to mention this point that people think famous people are really knowledgeable and successful. But, I strongly disagree with that. Some of these knowledgeable famous people become famous thanks to their money. They spend more money for managers or another leader for using them. As a result, famous people are not expert.
Having discussed the issue from that point of view, I would rather look at it from another perspective as well. Sometimes, some famous people are expert in their field that they are active. For instance, Froude, he is one of the greatest psychologists in the world. He has a lot of theory about people behavior, and mental health. It is better than we pay attention his speech and recommendations.
By taking all above-mentioned arguments into consideration, the following conclusion can be drawn about the issue. Underestimating the disadvantages of famous people in people's life is not logical. Attending to this issue meticulously contributes to becoming familiar with some wrong commons habits that we have, and can improve several aspects of personal as well as social life
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...they not experts, but also some of them dont have high-level education about their a...
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Line 10, column 347, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have, and can improve several aspects of personal as well as social life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, second, so, then, well, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2518.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 514.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89883268482 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75047464106 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484435797665 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 780.3 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0954704121 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9333333333 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297069777212 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905738680484 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688799201374 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143173004491 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465662265387 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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