When it comes to the issue of the selection between luck or hard work, some people believe that most of the achievements are gained by chance. However, opponents think we can not succeed unless working hard. As far as I am concerned, our efforts build our character, bring opportunities, and draw attention. Following, I try to explain my position clearly.
First, as we all know those are successful in the modern age that has a strong personality. You can not gain this significant feature unless by making efforts. One who wants to obtain a goal needs two things, an accurate plan and working hard. It means he should have regular activity, manage time, money, and energy and have discipline. Also, he soon notices that he ought to accept constructive criticisms and use them for reforming his behaviors.
Second, some people are waiting until their chance shines up. It is an idiot mindset that somebody believes in fate. No one offers a career to you unless you start the job searching process. No manager increases your salary while you do not do your responsibilities thoroughly. No students can gain a high grade in the comprehensive exam while he answers questions by chance. I think that a small quote from a well-known man may give some light on this point. Edison's famous word is:" opportunity is missed by most people because it is dressed in overalls and looks like work".
Third, all humans inclined to be loved by others. I think that there is not anything more effective than working hard to draw others' attention. You should do your duties with passion and give it your heart. I want to ask you to remember Cristiano Ronaldo When he was ten. At that time, nobody had known him unless his family and some of his friends. He abandoned home and tolerated difficulties because he found out attempt is the only successful way.
Taking into account all the factors and angles involved in the importance of endeavor or chance, we may conclude that we need to do our best. However, I have never ignored the likelihood of chance in our progress but we should not exaggerate its role. Last but not least, I hope the next generation become more active in all areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ot do your responsibilities thoroughly. No students can gain a high grade in the c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, third, well, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80687830688 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65727144169 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3596845406 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.68 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.12 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.24 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221668013682 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517572939748 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633422877848 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110439982219 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566379315271 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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