When schools do not have enough funding or teachers, some people think physical education classes should be cut, while others believe that courses in art and music should be eliminated first. Which do you think is preferable, and why?
In case, if school has to cut one of the classes between physical education and art and music, I would suggest to cut the art and music class. There are several reasons behind my choice.
First of all, I believe that art and music is mostly based on hobby. Not everyone will be interested in this. However, physical education classes are vital for student's overall physical and mental health and every student should take it. Many students would choose video games or other indoor games to fill their play time after school hours. For an instance, I, myself, used to prefer indoor games while playing in the evening time, because of being tired from school to do some outdoor activities. So, for students like me, it becomes essential that there is a compulsary physical education class in school.
Second, for art and music , student can take classes outside of school, based on their interest. Moreover, one can learn art and music at any time of the day. Whereas, physical activities need a lot of energy and should preferably be done during day time, the time when students will be in their school. For an example, a student after school hours will be very tired to play some rigorously demanding sport like football and will preferably skip it. So, it makes more sense to have physical education class during school hours, rather than, after.
Adding to the list of reasons, there are varities of sports and every sport requires different kind of physical arragement. For example, football can't be played with cricket stumps on the ground and vice versa. Most of the outdoor sport places will not have that kind of vast area or ground, as compared to school ground, to play all kinds of sport. Hence, students might need to go to multiple places to play different games which will be a total waste of their time.
Obviously, it seems more fair to have physical education class over art and music class in school because of the reasons stated above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest cutting'.
Suggestion: suggest cutting
...al education and art and music, I would suggest to cut the art and music class. There are seve...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... in school. Second, for art and music , student can take classes outside of sch...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...sical arragement. For example, football cant be played with cricket stumps on the gr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, whereas, while, as to, for example, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77941176471 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23867210787 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8632248142 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2777777778 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283934588583 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095658605163 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607934765004 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177594855653 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559804218748 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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