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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: nargess1981
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hi
hi my name nagy i want to pass toe skdjhka...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , anbeeuoyaYTEPIA
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: JawfeououyAWHE
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 15.1003584229 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 13.8261648746 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 43.0788530466 7% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 52.1666666667 2% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 460.0 1977.66487455 23% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 30.0 407.700716846 7% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 15.3333333333 4.8611393121 315% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 2.34034731932 4.48103885553 52% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 18.5550232791 2.67179642975 694% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 30.0 212.727598566 14% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 1.0 0.524837075471 191% => OK
syllable_count: 92.7 618.680645161 15% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.1 1.51630824373 204% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 460.0 100.406767564 458% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.6045352989 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 65.8 11.7677419355 559% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -85.87 58.1214874552 -148% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.7 10.1575268817 322% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 72.23 10.9000537634 663% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.12 8.01818996416 189% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 86.8835125448 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 23.0 10.002688172 230% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 10.247311828 224% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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