Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, having a decent job and being satidfied is one of the most central needs of human beings which should be fulfilled in order to improve the quality of life. In this matter, different factors such as the types of tasks have been considered by individuals. While many people hold the opinion that having various types of tasks to do during workday provide more satidfaction for people, others believe by doing similar tasks all day long, ones will be more satisfied. I agree with the latter perspective and the reasons to support my viewpoint is elaorated upon following paragraphs.
To begin with, doing similar tasks rather than performing wide variety of tasks are less stressfull. To be more specific, employess attemp to hire people with special field and profession for their opening position in order to manage and fulfill their companies needs. In addition, people after graduation from universites attemp to find a career which is relevent to their interest and knowledge background. Therefor, it is possible when people perform different types of tasks in their workplace some of them are not relevent to their main interest. In these cases, ones will encounter numerous challenges to carry out their tasks in the best form and these challenges lead to stress and tension. Besides, ones' mind will occopied with many aspects which they require to consider for solving their peoblems. On the other hand, if people know how to do their tasks, they will be more relaxed when they perfrom their activities.
Moreover, people would get promotion in their works when they do specific task. To put it in other words, if individuals have regularly challenge with their tasks, they will enhance their experiences in thier fields. As a result, person who has familair with various aspects of his/ her jobs, can carry out his tasks in best manner and in a short time. Consequently, after few years he / she affect his/ her boss and will take arewards or promotion. On the other hand, taking promotion if people do various tasks is very hard or impossible.
In conclusion, considering all the reasons, I thinks having same tasks during the workday have positive impacts on performance of people. Therefore, companies should contemplate advantages of this matter and provide the same tasks for each specific employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08355091384 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59326755679 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56135770235 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2503333316 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.166666667 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328189580025 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108696809547 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979422036737 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202285099869 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495036222755 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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