Workers are the vital power of the growth of economics because they devote themselves to work and contribute a lot to our society. So things about workers are concerned by our society. One of the questions that workers prefer which kinds of works, a work of different types of tasks or a work of similar tasks has been discussed a lot. As far as I am concerned, workers prefer to have many various types of tasks to do during the workday.
To start with, workers will not be bored with the job by doing different tasks year and year. It is a universal awareness that we human beings all curious about new stories, new products, new technologies, etc. When it comes to the work, it is the same. For instance, I do my part time job in a big company called Didi Taxi which develop a software for customers to call taxis conveniently. I not only help the developers code but also help them translate some reference books due to the fact that I am skilled in English. Coding is a hard work, someone who has the experience of coding may has the same feeling. You have to stair on the screen for a long time and thinking how to code deeply. When I am tired with coding, I always enjoy myself by translating reference books. By doing the different tasks I can free myself from coding all the time or translating all the time which may make me bored after a long time working.
Additionally, workers can learn new knowledge from different kinds of tasks. With the increasing development of technology, it is common that we can't depend on merely skill to earn enough money to live the life we want. Doing different tasks is a chance for us to improve ourselves. My friend FangQing is case in point. He major in software and he has won many coding prizes in school. However, he is not satisfied what he has achieved. In his spare time, he does the part time job in a small company where he can train his skills about hardware design. Now, his is both skilled in software and hardware design which are the two main parts of a successful electrical product. It is easy for him to design a hybrid-system containing hardware and software without the company of others. He has a high salary job in Huawei, a famous company around the world, as a hybrid system developer.
What cannot be denied is that doing different tasks is a big challenge for works. Learning is a tuff process which means we have to spend the time studying instead of dating, playing games, etc. Also, we may be frustrated in the process of learning new things. But all these hard work will be reward by the improved salary or the compliment of the boss. Imagine this, you are the only person in the company who solve the big problem faced by your company. You are the life saver for your boss. How exciting it is! It is obvious that this kind of feeling cannot be enjoyed by the workers who always do the same tasks every day.
From what I have elaborated above, it is easy to see that works are more likely to choose a job with a various kinds of tasks to do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tasks'' or 'task's'?
Suggestion: tasks'; task's
...e bored with the job by doing different tasks year and year. It is a universal awaren...
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Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
..., it is the same. For instance, I do my part time job in a big company called Didi Taxi w...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ent of technology, it is common that we cant depend on merely skill to earn enough m...
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Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...chieved. In his spare time, he does the part time job in a small company where he can tra...
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Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'kind'?
Suggestion: kind
...e likely to choose a job with a various kinds of tasks to do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for instance, kind of, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2470.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 559.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41860465116 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86242540663 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43299615778 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46511627907 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 772.2 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4147150846 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6774193548 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0322580645 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22580645161 5.45110844103 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250032985494 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621147988541 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721374345222 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147173682212 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656526955098 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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