However I have reasons to disagree with the statement to some states, I believe that it is true. I hold this idea that community was benefiting from help of the young people morein past because of their different life styles, lack of efficient services and their family conditions.
First and formost, the society has become more competitive recently and youngsters in order to make a prosperous life for themselves has to put a huge amount of energy on their majors. Moreover, they have to dedicate most of their time to work or study and the rest of it (thanks to the extented development of the internet and technology) is spended on social medias. Despite the fact that this kind of lifestyle is not approved by lots of people and they don' like it, young generations in order to keep up with the world kind of have to choose to live like this.
Secondly, families played an indispensable role in raring the kids not so long ago and families used to be bigger and every one used to live together. In that time kids would learn in families that they should help the elder ones and respect them. furthermore, parents used to show their kids that symphaty and compassion has a high value and is appericiated. Family has always had an inevitable impact on kids and prevailing the concept of help was one of its impacts in past. But, as the societies started to develope more and more reasons become to manifest for leaving the family and starting an independant life. Accordingly all those lessons begin to be forgotten as the time and the generations passed.
Furthermore, successive to this concept the services and the facilities started growing and now adays people can find any help they want just by a simple search in GOOGLE. Regarding the aminities that the government accomulated for people, living has become much more easier than the past.Therefore, youngesters find no point in helping someone when they are not going to need their help.
Consequently, we can understand that it is the community it self that has provided the base of this lifestyle not the kids. Although, not all of the kids are the same and we can still find goodness inside people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
However I have reasons to disagree with the sta...
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Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...d help the elder ones and respect them. furthermore, parents used to show their kids that s...
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Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
... concept of help was one of its impacts in past. But, as the societies started to devel...
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Line 3, column 618, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Accordingly,
...amily and starting an independant life. Accordingly all those lessons begin to be forgotten...
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Line 4, column 263, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ated for people, living has become much more easier than the past.Therefore, youngesters fi...
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Line 4, column 289, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...s become much more easier than the past.Therefore, youngesters find no point in helping s...
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Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...can understand that it is the community it self that has provided the base of this life...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...s lifestyle not the kids. Although, not all of the kids are the same and we can still find...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, as to, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74270557029 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63910400365 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533156498674 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.5807647837 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.2 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 5.45110844103 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189929503348 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595913836493 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591195018297 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105798752386 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553145484459 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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