In our daily life we make a lot of decision, only critical ones we call important decisions. I can't agree or disagree with this statetment because sitiuation is so important to take this decision, so the term "never" in this sentece ı can't join, ı will try to explain my idea with several reason.
First of all, when we are taking a decision stiation so important, ıf we have a limited time to take a decision, what were are gonna do ? Are we gonna call our family and disscus before we going to give our decision ? ı can create a imaginary thing, there is bomb in front of you and its only 10 second left, there is two color red cable , or blue ıf cut blue one you will safe people, if yo dont cut any cable it will explode anyway. This example maybe inaccurate but let me give my own experience, couple years ago my mother was so sick, and the doctor came to and told me ıf she stay here we can loose her, ıf you carry her in another hospital they can safe her life, but while she travel she can also die, and he gave me 5 min to think,ı made my decision ı called the ambulance, after 6 week my mom became a normal. Sometimes you dont have time to discuss for situation so you have to pick a way and after all you can only prey for god.
Secondly, ıf you have time to make a decision, you can share the option with your family or your friends, maybe they can change your idea by showing your poor view. but you can stiil make your own decision, ın this case your by your own. No matter what they tell you or what they show you end of the they you will make this decision.
In conclusion, as I mention ın the intro, I cant agree "never" ,maybe it will be a good option to asked and take opinion about your decision, but desicion is decision no matter what consequences will come with it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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In our daily life we make a lot of decis...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...cal ones we call important decisions. I cant agree or disagree with this statetment ...
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...s so important to take this decision, so the term 'never' in this sent...
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...tant to take this decision, so the term 'never' in this sentece ı cant...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...rm 'never' in this sentece ı cant join, ı will try to explain my idea wi...
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...'never' in this sentece ı cant join, ı will try to explain my idea with...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
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...oin, ı will try to explain my idea with several reason. First of all, when we are taking a...
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... before we going to give our decision ? ı can create a imaginary thing, there is ...
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...econd left, there is two color red cable , or blue ıf cut blue one you will safe p...
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...ut blue one you will safe people, if yo dont cut any cable it will explode anyway. ...
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...ll safe people, if yo dont cut any cable it will explode anyway. This example may...
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...d the doctor came to and told me ıf she stay here we can loose her, ıf you carry her...
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... to and told me ıf she stay here we can loose her, ıf you carry her in another hospit...
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... also die, and he gave me 5 min to think,ı made my decision ı called the ambulance...
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...ecision ı called the ambulance, after 6 week my mom became a normal. Sometimes you d...
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...k my mom became a normal. Sometimes you dont have time to discuss for situation so y...
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...ge your idea by showing your poor view. but you can stiil make your own decision, ı...
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...y tell you or what they show you end of the they you will make this decision. In conc...
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...onclusion, as I mention ın the intro, I cant agree 'never' ,maybe it will ...
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...he intro, I cant agree 'never' ,maybe it will be a good option to asked ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, after all, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 12.0772626932 8% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 63.0 22.412803532 281% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 349.0 270.72406181 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23495702006 5.08290768461 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3575574693 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527220630372 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.32908793 49.2860985944 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 110.228320801 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7272727273 21.698381199 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06452816374 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 4.19205298013 501% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.3589403974 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 53.8541721854 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.0289183223 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.85 12.2367328918 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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