The reading and the lecture are about the possibility of colonizing asteroids instead of planets or Moon. The passage provides three advantages of asteroids colonization. The lecturer challenges the claims put forth by the author. He is of the opinion that the reasons mentioned in the passage are not practical.
To begin with, the author argues that asteroids have lower gravity. The article mentions that lower gravity offers several advantages such as safe landing and takeoff of the surface of asteroids, and carrying more instruments, required to establish a colony, with spaceships. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that it is true that lower gravity grants spaceships some advantages, but it poses serious risks. In this regard, he says passengers and inhabitants in asteroids would suffer from several physical illnesses caused by losing muscles and deficiency in bone density in the long run, as it is already the case for scientists residing in the international space station.
Secondly, the author suggests that asteroids have ample resources of valuable minerals that are considered as rare materials on Earth. In the article it is said that materials such as gold and platinum can be dug out and transported to the earth, thereby increasing the profits of asteroids colonies. The lecturer, however, rebuts this by mentioning that while some invaluable minerals are in abundance in asteroids, other factors should be considered regarding the benefits of mining them. He elaborates on this by bringing up the point that the cost of mining and transportation of minerals is prohibitively high decreasing the gain margin for investors. He also adds the fact that there are many resources available, will increase the supply of these materials leading to a decline in the price and consequent decrease in the profit.
Finally, the author posits that traveling back and forth to asteroids is more convenient since some of them periodically orbit in the proximity of Earth, thereby making the travel easier and more affordable than travel to Mars. In contrast, the lecturer’s position is that periodic and unusual orbits of asteroids make getting back to earth much more difficult. He notes that while an asteroid is orbiting near the earth it is easy to get into it, but the problem arises when it gets far off Earth and sometimes it would go beyond Mars which makes it difficult to fly back to Earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, in contrast, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 30.3222958057 188% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2052.0 1373.03311258 149% => OK
No of words: 398.0 270.72406181 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15577889447 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82936886041 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 145.348785872 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552763819095 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 419.366225166 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4885118924 49.2860985944 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.705882353 110.228320801 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4117647059 21.698381199 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06452816374 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103896342964 0.272083759551 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363997716264 0.0996497079465 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038729168717 0.0662205650399 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067307749089 0.162205337803 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259616621747 0.0443174109184 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 63.6247240618 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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