Reading and lecture is about advantages of hydropower dams to generate electricity.
Article posits that construction of hydropower dam will be an efficient option to provide power to large number of houses, while lecture claims that construction of dams can lead to numerous drawbacks that he explained in this
following essay:
Firstly, article states that dams can produce artificial lakes which serve as a habitat
for numerous marine creatures, recreational area for the nearby residents and irrigate dry land for agriculture.
Lecture casts doubt on this statement made in reading. He thinks that water needs to be forcefully diverted back to the ocean in the process to form energy, that force of water might destroy the reproductive cycles of the marine creatures and kill their larvae. In addition, frequent floods in vicinity land can cause destruction of dense vegetation.
Secondly, reading implies that since hydropower is natural source of energy, atmosphere will be least likely to be polluted
as compared to other traditional non-renewable source of energy. In contrast, lecturer put forth that this hydropower dams emit methane gas in gas during the conversion process that is very harmful for atmosphere as it exacerbates global warming.
Thirdly, author thinks hydropower dams might generate exorbitant earning for the owners because they provide electricity
and water for agriculture. In contrary, lecture witnesses that frequent water run off might force people living nearby migrate to different places. To overcome this problem government might impose high taxes to residents to pay for residents' relocation and other expenses. As a result, this is not economically feasible option.
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- TPO-34 Integrated essay 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...rous drawbacks that he explained in this following essay: Firstly, article sta...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...here will be least likely to be polluted as compared to other traditional non-ren...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... owners because they provide electricity and water for agriculture. In contrary, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, in addition, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 262.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58015267176 5.08290768461 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84957854715 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 145.348785872 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 419.366225166 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 106.09632299 49.2860985944 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.909090909 110.228320801 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 21.698381199 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06452816374 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.09492273731 220% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13511430051 0.272083759551 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482360726295 0.0996497079465 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463968042231 0.0662205650399 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646515483177 0.162205337803 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373843321881 0.0443174109184 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.3589403974 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.8541721854 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.2367328918 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.42419426049 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 63.6247240618 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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