The article states that saving the endangered animals from extention is unnatural and has lots of drawbacks and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that even extention of one spices has bad consequances and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading posits that the extinction of animals and spices does not have any significand effect on the ecosystem and provides an example of the extinction of dinasaurs to illustrate it. The professor refutes this point and discuses the example provided by the author by saying that the authors points are incompilite because he did not mention the great shift in organisems which happend as a result of change in the type of spices that dominated the earth. He states that now that the humans are the dominant spices on the earth, extention of even one animal will have great effect on our lifes.
Second, the article claims that the advent in genetic engineeering makes us independent from the natural sourses and the extinction of animals do not have any bad effect on our medical solutions, however the professor contends that 40% of the drugs are made from natural resourses and extinction in any spices specially plants takes an apportiunity from us to develope a new medicen.
Third, the reading avers that saving animals and spices from extenction is costly and it is not justified. The professor opposes this point by saying that the truth is the opposite and the extection of spices is actully very costly. He provides and example of fresh muscle spices to illustrate this point. He states that there are more that 10000 jobs that will be lost if they get extict.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262626262626 0.261695866417 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.16835016835 0.158904122519 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0639730639731 0.0723426182421 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.040404040404 0.0435111971325 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.037037037037 0.0277247811725 134% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151515151515 0.128828473217 118% => OK
Participles: 0.030303030303 0.0370669169778 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53459482331 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.010101010101 0.0208969081088 48% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.13468013468 0.128158765124 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00673400673401 0.0158828679856 42% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010101010101 0.0114777025283 88% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1663.0 1645.83664459 101% => OK
No of words: 280.0 271.125827815 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93928571429 6.08160592843 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.04852973271 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.4 0.374372842146 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271428571429 0.287516216867 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164285714286 0.187439937562 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114285714286 0.113142543107 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53459482331 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489285714286 0.539623497131 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.1800014342 53.8517498576 88% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0529801325 77% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 21.7502111507 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.877114831 49.3711431718 184% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.3 132.220823453 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 21.7502111507 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.878197800319 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 55.1428571429 50.5018328374 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.80821917808 1.90840788429 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342029824727 0.549887131256 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.229877039725 0.142949733639 161% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0832197745754 0.0787303798458 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.707054437806 0.631733273073 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184536799638 0.139662658121 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200292750873 0.266732575781 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060284498217 0.103435571967 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.463118484071 0.414875509568 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0889052646934 0.0530846634433 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260026645522 0.40443939384 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440448410869 0.0528353158467 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.26048565121 23% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.