Essay - The Sydney Opera House
Sydney Opera House is the one of the most beautiful and astonishing structure in world. It just look like the sailling ship at full sail on the water.It requried total 17 years to bulid completely. In 1973 it was opened. In these 17 years the Sydney Opera House goes to differnt phases of construction as well as political debat.
The Sydney Opera House is totally unique and spectacular,magnificient .This uniqueness is because of the strcuture of the Sydney Opera House.The Sydney Opera House architecture was selected from 230 designs which submitted by main architecture firms worldwide. Actually the construction design selected, was spectacular designed by the architect Jorn Utzon from Denmark.
It is unique because it see different from different side.The most difficult part of the Sydney Opera House was the construction of the roof. The architect Jorn spend few years to construction of roof, which is look like the sail which is on the water. For this purpose they requried number of silk engineers to build the such sail roof. That time they had challege to how made the 200 feet high shell however , they achived with help of computer technology and the prestresses concrete.
In such way the Sydney Opera House is unique and beautiful.
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It just look like the sailling ship
It just looks like the sailing ship
Sentence: The architect Jorn spend few years to construction of roof, which is look like the sail which is on the water.
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Sentence: It just look like the sailling ship at full sail on the water.It requried total 17 years to bulid completely.
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Sentence: In these 17 years the Sydney Opera House goes to differnt phases of construction as well as political debat.
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Sentence: The Sydney Opera House is totally unique and spectacular,magnificient .This uniqueness is because of the strcuture of the Sydney Opera House.The Sydney Opera House architecture was selected from 230 designs which submitted by main architecture firms worldwide.
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Sentence: For this purpose they requried number of silk engineers to build the such sail roof.
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