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Integrated- Painting
The reading passage states that the painting "Portrait of an Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet' is not a work of Rembrandt by presenting several details of the painting that is unusual from Rembrandt's real paintings. However, the lecturer contradicts all the points of the reading, and provides supporting details to prove that this painting is painted by Rembrandt.
To begin with, the reading passage that the clothes of the woman in the painting show inconsistency as the white cap represents the style that servants would wear, but the luxurious fur collar cannot be afforded by servants. This e...
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Score: 26 in 30
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 12
No. of Words: 311 250
No. of Characters: 1498 1200
No. of Different Words: 138 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.199 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.817 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.543 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 60
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.214 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.206 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.395 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.568 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.096 0.07
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