In the set of material, both the reading and lecturer talk about the sleep troubles and its solution. The reading claims that over-the-counter medicines (OTC) are safer option for the sleeping trouble. However, the lecturer refutes this claim by explaining its side effects and discussed how dangerous it is.
First, the reading assert the point that incomplete-sleep is a natural problem, the same problem have observed in all mammals, birds, reptiles and fish etc. The sleep trouble causes unconciousness, inactivity in voluntary muscles which results in inability to react stimuli, so in short it has many disavantages but the article says that we can eliminate this by consuming OTC, this is much safer option. However, the lecturer says that insomina state is very harmful and if the person is experiencing this, then it is important to discuss with your health physician before taking any self-medication from over-the-counter. The over-the-counter (OTC) are dangerous and it has side effects. It is necessary to talk to doctor for the treatement of good sleep habits, advice for change lifestyle. The discussion with health physician may result long term benefits.
Secondly, the article posit that a little alcohol will induce sleep faster. In contrast, the lecturer opposes this point by explaining that it is always better to follow the instructions given by health physician to know the best time to drink alcohol. In addition to it, we should not drink alcohol before driving. Another key point is that it increases the chances of waking up during night. Hence, it is not advisable to drink alcohol in order to eliminate the sleep trouble. In fact, the lecturer recommend that the person who is suffering from insomia more than one month, he/she should have to consult doctor.
Thirdly, the article points that the prescribed sleep aids is the last option because many prescription sleep aids are not safe and person may get addicted to it, this become a habit and may cause dependency for a long time. In contrast, the lecturer says that, addiction increases dependency on sleep aids which have many disadvantages.
In conclusion, the lecturer effectively casts doubt on all the claims and theories presented in the reading
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1373.03311258 137% => OK
No of words: 363.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18457300275 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88237481994 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 145.348785872 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528925619835 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 419.366225166 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.23620309051 170% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.417343669 49.2860985944 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.555555556 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 7.06452816374 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165414573765 0.272083759551 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530372515356 0.0996497079465 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401769388477 0.0662205650399 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942894295485 0.162205337803 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275077136985 0.0443174109184 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 63.6247240618 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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