Integrated task
The reading text and lecture are both about the dog breeding. The author of this article believe that dog breeder is professional and they breed the dog for the desirable character. The lecturer is casting doubt on the points made by the author in the reading text.
Firstly, the author stats that main aim of the dog breeder is to breed dog for the most popular trait. He state tha,t they are improving the performance, appearance of the dog. They are mainly focusing on the pure breed. In contrast, the lecturer is argues on the topic describe by the author. He state that they are mainly a backyard dog breeder. They only want profit from ther dog . They ignore the animal welfare. As a result, of that purebreeding the intensity of the genetic disorder is increased by many folds in nowadays.
Secondly, the reading passage says that, The popular cultural shows increases the awareness about the dog culture and educate the people about it. Moreover, the reading text says that, this popular shows about various dog is popularized some breed of the dog. On the other hand, the lecturer is agreued that, this popular show also aware the people about health behavior problem of many dog breed. Just because, of that many people dump their puppiess in to the animal shelter house. Even, now they do not like the male puppies.
In conclusion, The reading text and lecture both about the dog breeding. The lecturer is able to effectivly counter the point made by the author in the reading statement.
- tpo04 60
- summaries points given in the text and hear in the lecture 63
- Ingrate the author s view and lecturer s opinion 76
- TPO60 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed the dog for the desirable character. The lecturer is casting doubt on the points...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , t
...for the most popular trait. He state tha,t they are improving the performance, app...
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Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...der. They only want profit from ther dog . They ignore the animal welfare. As a re...
^^
Line 3, column 518, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...tic disorder is increased by many folds in nowadays. Secondly, the reading passage says ...
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Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reued that, this popular show also aware the people about health behavior problem...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 260.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81153846154 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35639348239 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476923076923 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4419065113 49.2860985944 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5 110.228320801 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4444444444 21.698381199 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06452816374 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.3589403974 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.8541721854 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.2367328918 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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