Integrated writing TPO40
While the reading passage states that human can not go to a venus because of some problems, the professor in the lecture rejects this idea, and he gives some solution that I will mention below.
First, considering the reading passage, venus' surface has a hight pressure rather than the earth's surface, so people can not go there. In contrast, the professor in the lecture refuses idea that made in the reading, and he further explains that, it is not physical fact, and the pressure in the venus is equall with the prusser in the earth, so there is not any difference.
Second, the reading passage claims that, in the venus, there is not water. In contrary, the professor in the lecture, rejects this information, and he says that, oxygen needs for making water, and because of carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid, there is oxygen to have water. Actually, oxygen is essential for atmospher.
Finally, the authour in the article puts follow that, humans can not get electicity to power because of lack of light. On the other hand, the professor in the lecture illustrates, clouds are not thick, and they reflect light. Also, sunlight can throught above and below clouds not just below.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... above and below clouds not just below.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, if, second, so, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 1373.03311258 72% => OK
No of words: 203.0 270.72406181 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86699507389 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37340290004 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 145.348785872 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546798029557 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 419.366225166 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7924270027 49.2860985944 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.777777778 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06452816374 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26962287748 0.272083759551 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107954510836 0.0996497079465 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400282783434 0.0662205650399 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151155302615 0.162205337803 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405149176951 0.0443174109184 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.7273730684 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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