Jane Austen (1775-1817) is one of the most famous of all English novelists, and today her novels are more popular than ever, with several recently adapted as Hollywood movies. But we do not have many records of what she looked like. For a long time, the only accepted image of Austen was an amateur sketch of an adult Austen made by her sister Cassandra. However recently a professionally painted, full-length portrait of a teenage girl owned by a member of the Austen family has come up for sale. Although the professional painting is not titled Jane Austen, there are good reasons to believe she is the subject.
The main idea presented in both the reading and the lecture is about what Jane Austen looked like. Considering this, the reading passage claims that there is a masterpiece portrait depicting a teenage girl who is the subject, Jane Austen and provides three reasons for support. However, the lecturer finds all the ideas mentioned by the reading unconvincing and questionable and presents some evidence to refute each of them.
Firstly, the author argues that the portrait owned by a member of the Austen family is allowed to be used as a representative of Jane Austen who is the author of famous novels. In fact, her family advocates this claim that the girl in the painting is Jane Austen. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that this reason is highly questionable due to the fact that during the population of Jane's letters, she had died for 17 years and none of the Austen family members have never seen her themselves. Hence, the teenage girl in the painting is not Jane Austen.
Additionally, the article holds the view that the face of the teenage girl in the full-length portrait is elaborately somewhat akin to the one in Cassandra's sketch. On the contrary, the professor underlies the fact that the Austen family is a large and extended one which has many teenage girls resembling Jane Austen. In addition, Jane Austen has a niece named Mary who is actually very similar to her.
Finally, the passage asserts that there is evidence clarifying that the Austen family hired a professional painter who had been active for 10 years when Jane Austen was a teenager girl. In contrast, the speaker dismisses this issue due to the fact that the back of the painting is made of the black canvas and the one who sells canvas was for a later time when Jane Austen was not a teenager. Therefore the painting is not related to Jane Austen's full-length portray.
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...me when Jane Austen was not a teenager. Therefore the painting is not related to Jane Aus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, conversely, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, as for, in addition, in contrast, in fact, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 323.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80495356037 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57613790381 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482972136223 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.491408584 49.2860985944 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.384615385 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 21.698381199 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06452816374 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182008680696 0.272083759551 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791131540053 0.0996497079465 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318975035831 0.0662205650399 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119663655094 0.162205337803 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126267299399 0.0443174109184 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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