The author tells us about the conditions on Venus. He or She believes that extreme conditions do not allow the people to be on Venus. However, the speaker believes the challenges of human presence on Venus have been solved.
according to the author pressure at Venus’ surface is very grater than the pressure at Earth’s surface so when spacecraft attempting to land on Venus will be crushed as well as any vehicle that humans might land on Venus would be crushed.
Venus's atmosphere is made up mostly of carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and sulfuric acid so they contain less oxygen. These conditions showed us there are no reservoirs of water on Venus' surface. Lack of sufficient water and oxygen don't allow human to provide station on Venus.
Venus's atmosphere has a lot of thick clouds that fill it, which allow less sunlight to reach Venus' surface so people can't develop solar cells to generate electricity for their machines and equipment.
The speaker explains how the challenges of human presence on Venus are somewhat solvable. He says if the station is established 50 kilometers from the surface, the pressure problem can be solved so there will not exist any danger for human life. As a result, any spacecraft could not be crushed. Water and oxygen can be produced from chemical processing, this condition is a solution for human survival.
Station established on 50 kilometers from Venus' surface cause cloud less thick and reach direct sunlight so people can develop power station on Venus.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
...an presence on Venus have been solved. according to the author pressure at Venus’ surfac...
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ce. Lack of sufficient water and oxygen dont allow human to provide station on Venus...
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Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nlight to reach Venus surface so people cant develop solar cells to generate electri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 251.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99203187251 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55101440242 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533864541833 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2594740063 49.2860985944 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3846153846 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06452816374 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274127964219 0.272083759551 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106782864227 0.0996497079465 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531604478049 0.0662205650399 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14126221517 0.162205337803 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780567705903 0.0443174109184 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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