The article claims that the selling of precious, valuable and rare fossils to wealthy private collectors has led to an unfortunate development not only for the scientists, but also the ordinary public. The author of the passage provides three reasons of support. However, the professor, even if acknowlwdging that this sort of private selling has negative consequences, explains that the article exaggerated the issue. She thinks that the selling of fossils to private ownership hasmore merits that outweighs it's drawbacks and refutres each of the author's reason.
First. the passge posits that people suffers much as they don't get access to the private collection of fossils, resulting in the decline of public interest in fossils. the professor contardicts the point by stating that actually private collection offers great exposure of fossils to the public. She explains that now low livinng institutions can perchase these fossils from private collectors and are become able to exhibit them to the viwers.
Scond, the article explains that due the desire of wealthy fossil buyers to possess the rare valuable fosssils, the scientists are loosing access to them and thereby missing out the opportunity of discovering the extinct life forms. But the professor contends that it is not realistic. private collection of fossils allows to discover many undiscovered ones which universities were unable to discover due to rthe scarcity of money.
Finally, the passage claims that commercial collectors often cause damage of fossils thereby destroying scientific evidence associated with them. The professor avers that this collection passed out through rigorous examination, identification by the scienctific experts. So No evidence are get misssed out.
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- Private collectors have been selling and buying fossils, the petrified remains of ancient organisms, ever since the eighteenth century. In recent years, however, the sale of fossils, particularly of dinosaurs and other large vertebrates, has grown into a 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ership hasmore merits that outweighs its drawbacks and refutres each of the autho...
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... decline of public interest in fossils. the professor contardicts the point by stat...
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...stating that actually private collection offers great exposure of fossils to the ...
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...ssor contends that it is not realistic. private collection of fossils allows to discove...
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Suggestion: discovering
...c. private collection of fossils allows to discover many undiscovered ones which universit...
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...llows to discover many undiscovered ones which universities were unable to discov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, if, so, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 268.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5671641791 5.08290768461 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82107319981 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582089552239 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0083272124 49.2860985944 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.769230769 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100004650005 0.272083759551 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339632656935 0.0996497079465 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366310148407 0.0662205650399 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579794838651 0.162205337803 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439202829754 0.0443174109184 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.3589403974 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.8541721854 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.2367328918 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.42419426049 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 63.6247240618 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27 Out of 30
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