Ths listening claims that the idea of professors appearing on televisons is of not much benefit to the universities, public, and professors themselves. This claim is not in agreement with that of the reading passage, which suggest that televison appearances are of immense benefit to the professors as well as universities and the general public.
According to the lecture, the professor who is regular to television is not treated seriously by his fellow professors, rather, he or she is considered as a mere entertainer, who is not inclined to impart education. As a result, that professor is not invited to important meetings and conferences, and he also denied the money granted by university for research. Therefore, the professor does not benefit by appearing on televsion. The passage, by contrast, suggest that by appearing on televison academic authority of the professor is further strengthened to a wider audience (outside the academic community), which enhances the importance of professor and ultimately benefits him.
The second point of difference between lecture and passage concerns benefit to university. The lecture asserts that the time that the professor devotes on television, travelling to TV studios, preparing for his TV shows and dressing could be utilized better by professor by indulging in research, or with students or engaging in some university business, which would benefit the university. On the other hand, the reading says that positive publicity gained from televison appearances leads to an increased reputation of university among people, which eventually results in more applications and increased donations, hence helping the university.
Finally, the lecture argues that televison is not concerned with academic and intellectual knowledge of the professor, rather, it requires only the academic title to satisfy its requirements. A professor indulging in brief historical reporting or with a new movie does no benefit to the public as any ordinary person with little homework would have also satisfied the requirements of the TV company, hence role of professor is limited. However, the article contends that people gain from these TV appearances as common viewers have no contact with these intellectual people and it gives them a medium to learn from experts and gain their insight.
- TOEFL Official Guide - Practice Test 2 - Integrated Writing - Professors on TV 70
- Parents must use strict rules if they want their children to be successful 78
- TOEFL integrated writing: Dutch painter Rembrandt 90
- Your school has received a gift of money What do you think is the best way for your school to spend this money Use specific reasons and details to support your choice 97
- "In our region of Trillura, the majority of money spent on the schools that most students attend—the city-run public schools—comes from taxes that each city government collects. The region's cities differ, however, in the budgetary priority they give to p 70
I had written this essay
I had written this essay within 20 minutes.
Pls tell whether I am pendlised for exceeding the word limit?
A single spelling mistake is counted 5 times. Does it happn the same way in actual toefl test?
It is OK to have more words.
It is OK to have more words. There is no penalty. But most likely it is a hard job to have 360 words in 20 minutes in real TOEFL exam. and you don't need to paraphrase too much for those ideas from reading passage.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
The main flaws are Grammatical Errors not spelling errors:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
The spelling errors are generated by computer rating system.
Sentence: Ths listening claims that the idea of professors appearing on televisons is of not much benefit to the universities, public, and professors themselves.
Description: The token of is not usually followed by a negator
Suggestion: Refer to of and not
the reading passage, which suggest that
the reading passage, which suggests that
hence role of professor is limited
hence the role of professor is limited
people gain from these TV appearances as common viewers have no contact
people gained from these TV appearances as common viewers have no contact
Sentence: Ths listening claims that the idea of professors appearing on televisons is of not much benefit to the universities, public, and professors themselves.
Error: televisons Suggestion: televisions
Sentence: This claim is not in agreement with that of the reading passage, which suggest that televison appearances are of immense benefit to the professors as well as universities and the general public.
Error: televison Suggestion: television
Sentence: Therefore, the professor does not benefit by appearing on televsion.
Error: televsion Suggestion: television
Sentence: The passage, by contrast, suggest that by appearing on televison academic authority of the professor is further strengthened to a wider audience outside the academic community, which enhances the importance of professor and ultimately benefits him.
Error: televison Suggestion: television
Sentence: On the other hand, the reading says that positive publicity gained from televison appearances leads to an increased reputation of university among people, which eventually results in more applications and increased donations, hence helping the university.
Error: televison Suggestion: television
Sentence: Finally, the lecture argues that televison is not concerned with academic and intellectual knowledge of the professor, rather, it requires only the academic title to satisfy its requirements.
Error: televison Suggestion: television
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Words: 361 250
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 12 12
No. of Words: 361 250
No. of Characters: 1924 1200
No. of Different Words: 178 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.359 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.33 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.936 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 158 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 137 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 96 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 73 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.083 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.508 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.382 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.617 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.172 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4