The reading claims that large pteosurs were not capable of powered flight or glide. However, the lecturer finds all the ideas dubious and presents some evidence to refute them all, citing researcher reveal their capability.
The author argues that pterosures like modern reptiles were probably cold-blooded, which has a slow metabolism unable them to produce energy. On the contrary, the professor underlines the fact that fossil of them issued that they had dense with covering hair or fur which warm them. Also, they needed maintain high body temperature from cold weather. So, faster metabolism would supply energy needed low.
Furthermore, the reading passage holds the view that there is a small to the weight of animals which can be kept airborne by their powered flight, pterosure probably were so heavy that they couldn't flap their wings enough fast. On the contrary, the professor underlines the fact that they had unusual feature such as big size. Moreover, their bone was hallow instead of solid one that kept the low despite of larger body and that caused they needed low airborne to flap.
Finally, the reading asserts that all animals which have powered flight are able to take off from earth. In contrast, the speaker dismisses this issue due to the fact that there were important difference between birds and ptersures. In fact, birds use two lime for walking on round and this two lime push them to launch ,but ptresures had four lim. For example, four lime to push them not just back one and because of enjoying this feature they did not any trouble to run fast and launch themselves into the air.
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- TOEFL T P O 47 - Integrated Writing Task 3
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- TOEFL T P O 49 - Integrated Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ding claims that large pteosurs were not capable of powered flight or glide. Howe...
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...ng researcher reveal their capability. The author argues that pterosures like ...
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... were probably cold-blooded, which has a slow metabolism unable them to produce ...
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...ded, which has a slow metabolism unable them to produce energy. On the contrary,...
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...issued that they had dense with covering hair or fur which warm them. Also, they ...
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...emperature from cold weather. So, faster metabolism would supply energy needed lo...
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...rosure probably were so heavy that they couldnt flap their wings enough fast. On the co...
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...ch as big size. Moreover, their bone was hallow instead of solid one that kept th...
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... as big size. Moreover, their bone was hallow instead of solid one that kept the low ...
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...w despite of larger body and that caused they needed low airborne to flap. ...
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...nd that caused they needed low airborne to flap. Finally, the reading asser...
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...hat caused they needed low airborne to flap. Finally, the reading asserts t...
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...ds use two lime for walking on round and this two lime push them to launch ,but ...
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... for walking on round and this two lime push them to launch ,but ptresures had ...
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... and this two lime push them to launch ,but ptresures had four lim. For example...
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... this two lime push them to launch ,but ptresures had four lim. For example, fou...
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...ot just back one and because of enjoying this feature they did not any trouble to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in contrast, in fact, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 273.0 270.72406181 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95970695971 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2635110193 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 145.348785872 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3970249573 49.2860985944 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.153846154 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06452816374 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 4.19205298013 406% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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