Both reading and lecture are about Chevalier de Seingalt luxury life. Reading explains some critics having doubt on his wealthy life and provides three reason. However, the lecture disputed the arguments made in reading.
First,according to reading Chevalier claims that while he lived in Switzerland, he was very rich and spent lot of many at6 parties and gambling but some critics argue that why he had to borrow some money from merchant if he was had enough wealth. In contrast, lecture tends to say that no doubt Chevalier was rich but actually he had to wait till then own money achieved and that why got help from merchant.
Second, reading asserts that Chevalier discussed in his writing that he had met famous writer Voltaire. Critics complain that the conversation between them, which was written by Chevalier was not accurate because it was written many years after the incident. Inversely, Professor suggests that Chevalier used to write little but every night.
Finally, article contends that Chevalier explained that he offered bribe to jailers and escaped from jail by using metal road to make hole in ceiling and climbing through the roof. On the other hand, lecture refutes this points by saying that there are many prisoner which have strong connection with politics and have wealther friends. If it was possible then why should not tried yet?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , according
...d the arguments made in reading. First,according to reading Chevalier claims that while ...
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Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Second, reading asserts that Chevalier discussed in his writing that he had met...
^^
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun prisoner seems to be countable; consider using: 'many prisoners'.
Suggestion: many prisoners
...es this points by saying that there are many prisoner which have strong connection with polit...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'prisoners'?
Suggestion: prisoners
...is points by saying that there are many prisoner which have strong connection with polit...
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Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'try'
Suggestion: try
... If it was possible then why should not tried yet?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, then, while, in contrast, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 225.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07111111111 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40158795203 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617777777778 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2227129007 49.2860985944 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.727272727 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06452816374 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234488458622 0.272083759551 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895829851828 0.0996497079465 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697303675626 0.0662205650399 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141651994237 0.162205337803 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613865136993 0.0443174109184 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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