The article claims that there are a lot of advantages if the employees shift to four work week instead of five. The lecturer refutes all claims made in the article. He says that four work week would not affect the companies, individuals and country as mentioned in the article.
First of all, the author claims that four work week would benefit the company by reducing errors when employees became more relaxed and focused. The lecturer, on the other hand, states that this would led companies to spend more money. He puts forth the idea that the company would need to hire more worker, which would add extra medical benefit, training and space for the new worker.
Secondly, the author of the article thinks that working four work week will help country by reducing the unemployment rate. On the contrary, the professor opposes this idea. He points out that companies would not follow hiring new workers because of the high expense mentioned before, and this would led to offer over time to the employees to finish extra work, and this would make job unpleasant.
Finally, the article states that working four work week would improve employee’s quality of life, because they will have extra free time they could spend it with their families. However, this point is challenged by the lecturer. He points out that company would fire those employees in the first economic crisis and those employees will not be promoted to new high management position.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...ges if the employees shift to four work week instead of five. The lecturer refutes a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
... the other hand, states that this would led companies to spend more money. He puts ...
^^^
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worker' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worker
...dea that the company would need to hire more worker, which would add extra medical benefit,...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...e article thinks that working four work week will help country by reducing the unemp...
^^^^
Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...xpense mentioned before, and this would led to offer over time to the employees to ...
^^^
Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...e article states that working four work week would improve employee's quality o...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 246.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96341463415 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31893022145 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524390243902 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2692681113 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06452816374 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490039049409 0.272083759551 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175682371529 0.0996497079465 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113684060315 0.0662205650399 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319719989023 0.162205337803 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614300778388 0.0443174109184 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.