The article states that it would be beneficial to lessen the work days from five to four per week even if employees income may become less, in the United States. The article provides three reasons for support. However, the professor holds a totally different view and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading states that offer of four-day work per week with eighty percent of their normal pay would benefit the economy as a whole. The professor refutes this point by stating that companies will spend a lot more by adding a new worker. In fact, something such as training courses for a new workforce will rise up expenses. In addition, when we talk about health or medical benefits, there is no difference between a four-day worker and 5 workers. Therefore decreasing work hours or days would not be considered as a budget-savings plan. The professor adds, even with decreasing work days and employing new workers instead, some new expenses may appear like, needing new office rooms, new computers and etc.
Second, the article claims that shortened workweek will leave workers with more free hours. Workers would feel more rested and alerted and thus, there would fewer costly errors at work. Consequently, it would increase company's profit. However, the professor contends that hiring new workforce is costly itself because employers can increase work hours in order to compensate the lack of one workday which can make working hours more unpleasant.
Third, the reading avers that the life quality will be improved by following this plan since employees will be given extra time to spend with their families, pursue a private interest and etc. The lecture opposes this point by saying that, four-day employees are less likely to get promotions since company managers would prefer five-day employees to ensure continues coverage and supervision for the entire week.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...etween a four-day worker and 5 workers. Therefore decreasing work hours or days would not...
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Line 3, column 709, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...needing new office rooms, new computers and etc. Second, the article claims that shor...
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Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...eir families, pursue a private interest and etc. The lecture opposes this point by sayi...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lies, pursue a private interest and etc. The lecture opposes this point by saying...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, thus, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 5.04856512141 317% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1373.03311258 115% => OK
No of words: 308.0 270.72406181 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1461038961 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44913467737 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 145.348785872 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603896103896 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1899739926 49.2860985944 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 110.228320801 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.488118953731 0.272083759551 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154202421507 0.0996497079465 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109109003061 0.0662205650399 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287167923166 0.162205337803 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459834171646 0.0443174109184 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 63.6247240618 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.