The reading and the lecture are both about the legitimacy of Rembrants famous painting "Portrait of an Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet". Moreover, the reading states that there are some inconsistencies, which are not typical for Rembrants art. However, the lecturer cast doubts on the claims made in the article. She states that a panel of experts approved that the drawing was made by Rembrandt.
First, the author points out that the woman dress in the painting shows a white line cap, which only was worn by servants, but on the other side, the woman has also a luxurious fur collar, which only the rich could afford. The lecturer rebuts this argument. She claims that, couple years later, the fur colour was painted over the original art from another artist to sell the art for a higher price.
Second, the author states that the light and shadow in this Rembrandt artwork does not match together. Further, he illustrates that the face in the painting is highlighted from a dark fur collar, which is highly unlikely to be so. The point is challenged by the lecturer. She argues, that Rembrandt considered the play of light and shadow in his original painting. However, the overpainting of another artist destroyed this.
Finally, the author illustrates that the artwork was painted on a panel made of several pieces, which Rembrandt has never done before. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits that the overpainting of the second artist was responsible for this believe, because he wanted to increase the size of the drawing for his own drawings. She claims that the original painting of Rembrandt was drawn on single piece of wood panels.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
... second artist was responsible for this believe, because he wanted to increase the size...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, moreover, second, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 280.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94642857143 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59422189585 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503571428571 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 419.366225166 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9106406691 49.2860985944 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418705038459 0.272083759551 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129098903613 0.0996497079465 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929853794715 0.0662205650399 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256983574884 0.162205337803 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587539911931 0.0443174109184 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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