The article discusses several measures that have been proposed to stop cane tods in Australia and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor states that it will not easy to get rid of cane toad and she refutes each of the author"s reasons.
First, the article claims that cane toads spread could be prevented by building a national fence, this fence will prevents moving cane toad to areas that have not been colonized yet. The professor opposes this point by explaining that young and eggs of cane toads are found on rivers and streams, so they flow from one side to another. She concludes that building a fence will be unnecessary and it will not stop the spread.
Second, the reading posits that cane toad could be easily captured and destroyed by volunteers, by using their hands. On the other hand, the professor states that this way can be successful. However, these untrained people could destroy native frogs species too, which is endangered species. Since the native frogs and cane toads are similar in shape, people, who untrained, will not be able to distinguish between them.
Third, the article states that developing a disease-causing virus to control the cane toads populations. The professor refutes this point by stating that this idea has terrible consequences in South and central Americas. Reptile species are transport from Australia to other countries. Since it reach central and south Americas, it devastated the populations and ultimately disturbing the ecological system in that areas. because, these reptile species play a vital part in their ecosystem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'prevent'
Suggestion: prevent
...lding a national fence, this fence will prevents moving cane toad to areas that have not...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 423, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...ng the ecological system in that areas. because, these reptile species play a vital par...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 423, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng the ecological system in that areas. because, these reptile species play a vital par...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, third, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 260.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18846153846 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6177901833 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.116997792494 855% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.207949963 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3571428571 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06452816374 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.536281473889 0.272083759551 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171135985782 0.0996497079465 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12013306903 0.0662205650399 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314131472826 0.162205337803 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111721504736 0.0443174109184 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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