The reading and the lecture discuss the destruction of pesticide to wildlife in the U.S from different perspectives. The lecture seems to negate all the reasons that the article has mentioned.
First of all, the author of the reading points out that the expansion of human populations declines the natural habitats of birds. This point is challenged by the lecture. He restates that fact that urban growth provides better place for birds. In fact there are many kinds of birds, such as haws and pigeons have been increasing tremendously in cities.
Secondly, the author of the reading contends that increase of agricultural activities cause the decline bird population in rural areas. The lecture rebuts this point with the fact that nowadays the agricultural products have increased, but not because of the reason asserted in the passage. Actually, Americans do not crop as much as before. Their land is used fewer than it was in the past. Therefore, the reason that the article complained is incorrect.
Finally, the author of the reading states that because the development of agriculture, the use of chemical pesticides will increase. As a result, the poisons can get into the water and food chain, which harm birds. The lecture, on the other hand, opposes this idea with the fact that in the past pesticides used to harm birds, but now people are aware of this problem. So, they develop a kind of pesticides that contains less toxic and it only affects crops it is ineffective pets. Therefore, this pesticide does not harm birds at all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...ction of pesticide to wildlife in the U.S from different perspectives. The lectur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 259.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97297297297 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62313090223 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9279230086 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306817190369 0.272083759551 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838181741696 0.0996497079465 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682641837523 0.0662205650399 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153906784386 0.162205337803 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858089528548 0.0443174109184 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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