The reading states that experts are considering three options to help a special tree called Torreya grow in large quantities and thrive again. The professor states that none of these options are satisfactory solutions for the problem and refutes each of the options.
First, the article states that the first option is to reestablish Torreya in the same location in which it thrived for thousands of years. The professor says that Torreya is unlikely to grow in the same location again since the environment is strongly affected by the temperature increase caused by global warming and wetlands are drained by floods. She believes that Torreya cannot survive within the same location and finally start to get extinct again.
Second, the article claims that the second option is to move Torreya to an entirely different location, far from its Florida microclimate in the northern forests where the temperature is significantly cooler. The lecturer states that when black locus was moved to north there were some consequences and these trees spread so quickly and that caused to kill other plants which were already in the danger of extinction. She mentions that there are unpredictable consequences for any species movement to a new location.
Third, the reading contends that the third option is to preserve Torreya in research centers. The professor claims that in this situation the small population will not be able to resist disease. She adds that in order to resist disease large population of trees and reverse is needed and preserved environments do not have the enough capacity for this population, therefore Torreya will not be capable of surviving disease in the long term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Torreya) must be used with a third-person verb: 'grows'.
Suggestion: grows
...s to help a special tree called Torreya grow in large quantities and thrive again. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 274.0 270.72406181 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15693430657 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64575382828 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551094890511 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 419.366225166 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8562685399 49.2860985944 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.454545455 110.228320801 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 21.698381199 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.06452816374 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419578515311 0.272083759551 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153446746833 0.0996497079465 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942534721485 0.0662205650399 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229309479053 0.162205337803 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443031628959 0.0443174109184 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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