The lecture and the reading both discuss three ways for surviving Torreya. While the reading states that the condition of Torreya become critical because the number of these trees become reduce. The lecture refutes this, saying that none of these three strategies provide ways for surviving Torreya.
First of all, the reading claims that by reestablishing Torreya in places which have a microclimate and are cooler and wettest than a dry regain such as north of Florida. However, the lecture argues that for one strategy, it is unlikely become successes because, by changing climate, it is difficult to survive. Besides, global warming increases the temperature and the Torreya need to survive in a wet temperature.
In addition, the reading makes the argument that by relocating Torreya in a place especially north and as some scientists suggest that further of the north we can help Torreya to more survive. The lecture counters this point by stating by considering this event when the black trees have moved by the people in the north after that these black trees quickly spread and became increased and led to kill other plants.
Lastly, the reading passage argues that the Torreya are maintained in a research center in order to save the Torreya and another thing, to get more research on Torreya to help survive. The lecture refutes this by pointing out that the scientists do not able to solve this issues and the Torreya should preserve relatively and genetically. According to the lecture, these trees do not have the capacity to survive in a long term.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'lastly', 'so', 'while', 'another thing', 'in addition', 'such as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240282685512 0.261695866417 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.180212014134 0.158904122519 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0600706713781 0.0723426182421 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0353356890459 0.0435111971325 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0106007067138 0.0277247811725 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.144876325088 0.128828473217 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0494699646643 0.0370669169778 133% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54228923188 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0353356890459 0.0208969081088 169% => OK
Particles: 0.00353356890459 0.00154638098197 229% => OK
Determiners: 0.151943462898 0.128158765124 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00706713780919 0.0158828679856 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00706713780919 0.0114777025283 62% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1565.0 1645.83664459 95% => OK
No of words: 261.0 271.125827815 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99616858238 6.08160592843 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.04852973271 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.386973180077 0.374372842146 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.310344827586 0.287516216867 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168582375479 0.187439937562 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.088122605364 0.113142543107 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54228923188 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513409961686 0.539623497131 95% => OK
Word variations: 49.174658597 53.8517498576 91% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0529801325 84% => OK
Sentence length: 23.7272727273 21.7502111507 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0079882717 49.3711431718 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.272727273 132.220823453 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 21.7502111507 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.878197800319 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 54.7617554859 50.5018328374 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.921875 1.90840788429 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.662110575655 0.549887131256 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.139395221877 0.142949733639 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0591860547897 0.0787303798458 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.679581435217 0.631733273073 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0898761986952 0.139662658121 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.345591885195 0.266732575781 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870292478341 0.103435571967 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.448010273707 0.414875509568 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0843539225769 0.0530846634433 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.489586072781 0.40443939384 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723637884361 0.0528353158467 137% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.2958057395 97% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.