tpo 2
The material discusses the concept of teamworking. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage.
Firstly, the reading details specific points regarding to this topic, namely teamworking has broad knowledge and skills. Next, the work can move quickly. Finally, working in a team is very rewarding for team members.
Conversely, the listening challenges the points, one specific contradiction is in the teamworking some members get free rides, while other members do not contribute at all. However, after the work is done the recognition go to the group as a whole no names are named. In addition to that, team work usually take long time to reach a consensus, given that members do many meetings to take decisions. One final point, some members of the team are very influential, which affect other members’ opinion. Provided that these members don’t agree about one idea, this idea will be dropped without being discussed. One the other hand, they may encourage other bad idea and convince other members to agree; despite, this idea might not work. if the project fails, the blame will place on the whole group.
In summary, there are obvious discrepancies in the information presented.
- parent today do not have enough time to spend with their kids it is better to spend that time playing=g games or sprots with their kids , other people believe that they should spend time doing things related to schoolwork? 60
- do you agree or disagree people today spend too much time doing things they like to do rather than doing thing than doing things they should do? 78
- do you agree or disagree, the government should spend more money on arts than on sports? 83
- do you agree or disagree? employees should work fast and risk doing mistakes rather than work slowly and make sure everything is correct? 76
- tpo 21 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oints outlined in the reading passage. Firstly, the reading details specific po...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m is very rewarding for team members. Conversely, the listening challenges the...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ree; despite, this idea might not work. if the project fails, the blame will place...
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Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...repancies in the information presented.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, while, in addition, in summary, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 22.412803532 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 1373.03311258 79% => OK
No of words: 206.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25242718447 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73471208771 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 419.366225166 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1386446143 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2307692308 110.228320801 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 21.698381199 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06452816374 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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