tpo 20
The passage asserts that the government accepts a policy which was "let it burn" and it was about letting fire to carry on until it stops by itself and it is not necessary for people to do any action. In reading passage this policy seems ridiculous and harms our environment for several reasons; however, the professor says that this is not a bad idea and not only it did not have bad effects on the surrounding area but also it helped it in many ways.
Firstly, the passage claims that it affected the forest vegetation and burn almost 33% of the plants of the national park and now it looks like devastated wasteland; nevertheless, the lecturer believes that this fire helped that areas plants to rise in a better way because it burned some tall trees which did not let other small plants to be affected by sunlight and absorb its mineral and radiations. furthermore, these open lands cause other plants to grow in that place which had not grown in the past.
Secondly, the passage mentions that this fire harmed a food chain by killing some small species which could not escape and also killed some big animals like deers and elks, in contrast, professor has another opinion and she says this phenomenon made that area better environment for new species like rabbit and hares and due to presence of these animals their preditors came there and helped new food chains to establish.
Finally, in the reading the writer claim that this incident has frightened tourists to come and visit the Yellowstone national park then it affected small businesses that earn money from visitors; the speaker, However, told students that this fire happened one time and has not happened again in that park to effect on visitors number and it was because of driness and heavy winds in that year. also, she mentions tourists came to that area the year after that, so we can not say this fire has reduced the park's visitors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a but also it helped it in many ways. Firstly, the passage claims that it affe...
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Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
... and absorb its mineral and radiations. furthermore, these open lands cause other plants to...
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Line 7, column 396, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...f driness and heavy winds in that year. also, she mentions tourists came to that are...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 7.30242825607 260% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 22.412803532 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 335.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74925373134 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35155683727 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531343283582 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 21.2450331126 221% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.295566112 49.2860985944 252% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.285714286 110.228320801 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.8571428571 21.698381199 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.7142857143 7.06452816374 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285119447326 0.272083759551 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130064747623 0.0996497079465 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480077494433 0.0662205650399 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166006314183 0.162205337803 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422771785763 0.0443174109184 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 13.3589403974 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 53.8541721854 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 11.0289183223 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.16 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.498013245 198% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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