The article states that according to scientists Little Ice Age caused by three reasons. Hoever, the professor explains none of the authors reasons are convincing and refutes them one by one.
To begin with, changing the ocean current that caused by melting snows like Gulf Stream may cause the cooling weather. Nevertheless, the professor argues that Gulf Stream has effection on America not southern part of earth like south hemisphere and because of this Gulf stream cannot be the main cause of the Little Ice Age creation.
In addition, according to essay volcanic eruption could be the point that creat situation to cause Little Ice Age, as the reading claims, is refuted by the professor. He asserts that volcanic eruption is not strong enough tp produce such massive amount of gas and cloud to change weather to cause the weather to become cold.
Finally, based on author's opinion, less population of humans and forest trees that can absorb carbon dioxide and prevent increasing of greenhouse gas can avoid the weather to become warm. Therefore this reason may cause weather to be cooled. On the contrary, the professor shows that trees should have more time to do such significant change in air conditioning. So trees could not be the factor of this event.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...s can avoid the weather to become warm. Therefore this reason may cause weather to be coo...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, in addition, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 1373.03311258 77% => OK
No of words: 212.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00471698113 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43832339289 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 419.366225166 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7113839697 49.2860985944 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1 110.228320801 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357162283305 0.272083759551 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133308271326 0.0996497079465 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722763013244 0.0662205650399 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204257501265 0.162205337803 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390690050546 0.0443174109184 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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