The reading and lecture both discuss the hypothesis of edmontosaurus migration to the south slope through the winter time. While the reading provides three explanations to support this migration, the professor refutes, saying none of these claims are convincing.
Firstly, the reading avers that during the winter time there was not plants for edmontosaurs to survive. So, they migrated to the warmer area to fine food. On the other hand, the professor questions this notion by saying that edmontosurus did not have to migrate to search about food. long time ago, the weather was so warm and the sun was twenty hours per day during the summer. So, there was plenty of plants and vegetation as a good source of food supply. As a result, if the plants died during the winter time, edmontosaurus still had a lot of vegetation as enough source of nutrition available.
Secondly, the article states that they discovered skeleton of these animals that shows that endomontosusrs were living in herds. So, they might migrated easy to the south area. However, the professor rejects this idea by pointing out that living in herds does not mean that they have to migrate. Nevertheless, they might live in herds for different reasons. For instance, they can protect themselves from any predators. For example, Elka were living in herds, but they did not migrate.
Lastly, the article mentions that edmontosaurus were so fast animals and this ability could help them to migrate. Nevertheless, the professor contradicts this point by explaining that young edmontosaurus that called juvinlle could not travel Long distance. In addition, edmontosaurs can not live juvinlle behind and juvinlle could not live alone. Consequently, they stayed together in the winter time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...migration, the professor refutes, saying none of these claims are convincing. ...
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...t have to migrate to search about food. long time ago, the weather was so warm and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 284.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20774647887 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73167507231 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531690140845 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0117824084 49.2860985944 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1666666667 110.228320801 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 21.698381199 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.06452816374 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246957432112 0.272083759551 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778840822195 0.0996497079465 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037661682291 0.0662205650399 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139356774269 0.162205337803 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302034873908 0.0443174109184 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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