The reading and lecture both discuss the possibility of life on Venus' surface. While the reading provides three reasons to explain that is impossible to live on venus' surface, the professor refutes saying that none of these claims are convincing.
Firstly, the reading avers that the pressure on venus' surface is so high and that will crush anything. However, the professor rejects this notion by saying that the station will float at fifteen cloimeter above the surface. Also, the station is in high location can solve this problem. This is because the pressure is getting lower in high level. In addition, the venus's pressure is equal to the earth pressure. So, nothing will be crushed on venus' surface.
In addition, the reading states that it is very hard to find water or oxygen on venus' surface. Moreover, it is impractical to import them from earth. On the other hand, the professor questions this point by explaining that venus contains carbon dioxide and sulforic acid. So, we can produce water and oxygen from chemical reaction. As a result, there is no need to import them from the earth planet.
Lastly, the article mentions that the thick clouds block the sunlight to get into venus. So, human cannot get any solar system to produce energy. Nevertheless, the professor argues this idea by pointing out that these clouds that located at high level are not thick enough to block the sunlight. So, these will allow the sunlight to go throw. In addition, clouds reflect the sunlight. Furthermore, people can use this reflection to produce electricity. Consequently, people can produce energy from these power stations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w the sunlight to go throw. In addition, clouds reflect the sunlight. Furthermore...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 271.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0405904059 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46375670161 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531365313653 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2244064959 49.2860985944 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3 110.228320801 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.55 21.698381199 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06452816374 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361034088107 0.272083759551 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110029139978 0.0996497079465 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584233123338 0.0662205650399 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2089282806 0.162205337803 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463182761911 0.0443174109184 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.3589403974 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.8541721854 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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